The kid with the baggage"My suitcase is open, what will you add?" " Nothing, I'll help you to carry it instead." You smiled as you tried to convince me it's true,You know what the problem is? They said it too.They turned over the suitcase, emptied on the floor.It made me feel lighter. Then they reached for the door. But before they left, they turned around,To put back all the garbage they found on the ground.I tried to stop them, to close up in time. But they knew how to open that suitcase of mine.Now I'm on my journey. Mess keeps spilling out. 'The suitcase stays closed' is the last thing I vowed.
Dancing on the leavesLightly dancing on a tip of the leafClose to the edge like in a dreamFaster and faster she swirled aroundEveryone's watching but nobody foundA reason to tell it would be over soonWhen she grows uploses her youthFor now she keeps singing believes in her dreamsNot old enough yet to slip off the leaves
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